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Ascent: Prologue

By : Story Liner


???: “We live in a world full of amazing creatures. There’s Dragon tribe who have strong scale and can breathe fire. There’s fairy from Kingdom of Fairytale who use forest magic for their daily life, and  there’s us The Avians who are blessed with wings. With these wings we manage to rule the hills and skies, we build our homes in Feather Hill, a beautiful land where The Avians live in peace.  However, one day the army of those cursed metallic android invade us. We lose in a war with them and thus we are forced to leave Feather Hill and ran across the sea. Those evil androids even dare to claim Feather Hill as their own and taint it with their cities and empire. Now boys and girls, you need to become strong and when you’re 18 join the army and reclaim our……”

???: “Yeah yeah we already heard this many times Elder, this is so boring I thought you are going to say something different. C’mon friends, let’s do something interesting, let’s have a racing competition”

Children: “Yeah let’s play outside, see ya later Elder hehehe”

Elder: ”RAYDEN CAERIUS, How dare you interrupt me when I’m speaking, and where are you going? I’m not yet finished.”

Rayden: Chill out Elder, we won’t hear this story again, my parents is leading the invasion this year, they will surely win and reclaim Feather Hill.”

Elder: Y-yes, Warchief Caerius is leading the army, but still you all need to dedicate…… *sigh* they are gone. Well I guess I just need to believe in Rayden. Avian with golden wings sure is an interesting fellow.

          Scene changes to the outskirt Avian village, where avian build their home after losing the war. The village itself is full of Korowai, a hut at the top of towering structure made from lumber. The Elder Hut is at the center of the village and it’s the biggest and the tallest structure in the village. It can support an entire village during village monthly meeting. Not far from the Elder Hut to the east, there’s Avian Dojo where Avians can learn military and combat skill. At the border of the village, there are many post sentries where village guard patrol. If we go to the east from the border you can find Wind Meadow, a meadow full of strong wind. This is the place where the avian test their flying skill and we’re heading there because Rayden said so hehe.

Rayden: Ok the rule is simple, the first one who can fly across the meadows is the winner

Children 1: Right, today is the day I will defeat Rayden the Golden Wing

*Piano Passage start: treng.. treng..  trengtrengtreng.. treng treng treng treng treng GOLDEN WIN… *SMACK
I’m sorry due to the narrator attempt to be cent (Receh) we need to smack him, ok moving on.

          The race started, Rayden and his friends try their best navigating the Wind Meadow, one by one his friends are swept by the wind current, but Rayden is different, he makes the wind as his friend (kinda like Tsubasa) and thus he manages to use the wind to fly even faster

Rayden: Hahaha I manage to win again…. Wait what is that??!

          As Rayden lay his gaze upon the horizon he look a battalion of Avians marching home, but there’s something wrong, they are bloodied and their expression full of grief. Rayden recognize that the one who lead the battalion is Uncle Caesar, his father best friend. Rayden charge at them with full speed.

Rayden: WHAT HAPPENED?? WHERE’S MY PARENTS?? Uncle Caesar where’s my Father?

Caesar: Rayden, we fight the android but they prove too much for us, your father order us to retreat but during retreating your mother Saya was killed and your father……  Warchief Caerius stood his ground…. to protect us retreating. I’m sorry Rayden, I’m so sorry

Rayden is shocked, his father didn’t return and his mother was killed in action.

Caesar: We manage to bring your mother’s body home…. You should look to her

          Rayden stood still when he sees his mother body, and a moment later a cry was heard so loud. Since that fateful day, Rayden train so hard to be the greatest warrior ever so that he can avenge his parents.

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10 Years Later… in Avian Dojo



Rayden: Hyaaargh Hyaargh Hyaaargh, take this Rayden Dash!!!!

Combatant: Uaaaagh, I yield I yield!!

Dojo Master: Well congratulation Rayden, not only you manage to master Avian Combat Art, but you also manage to remain undefeated in this past 10 years

Rayden: Thank you master, so it means I’m able to join the army right?

Dojo Master: Technically you can, since you’re already 18 and you’re already prove your strength, but it remains to be seen by the warchief’s judgement.

Rayden: Great, it’s time to teach those android some lessons, Master I’m going to the cemetery, thank you for this past 10 years

          Rayden is happy he finally able to join the army this year, right now he is heading towards the cemetery to get his mother blessing, but along the way he spots some commotion in the village, curious Rayden head there.

          In commotion area, stood an Avian Girl beating some guards, but this is not an ordinary Avian as Rayden think to himself, on closer look Rayden realize that this Avian Girl has a wing made from metal! Not only her wing, but also part of her left hand and leg. The Avian Girl also wears an eyepatch on her left eye. Now, the villagers form a mob and start throwing rocks at her.

Avian Girl: Why you people attack me? I’m just returning to my village and yet this is the greeting that I get from the army and villagers?

Villager: Die you android freak, how dare you enter this village
Avian Girl: Are you people dummy? As I explained before I’m an Avian!!!

Villager: Then, why you have metallic part?

Avian Girl: Well…. That’s because…

Villager: See, you can’t answer it, you’re just a spy, die freak!!!

          As the villager start to throw rocks again suddenly there’s huge wind breeze and in a matter of second the girl vanishes. Turn out it’s Rayden that saves her with his flying speed.

Avian Girl: What, Who are you?

Rayden: Name is Rayden, let’s head to my house, it looks like this place isn’t save

Avian Girl: O—Okay

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Inside Rayden House:

Avian Girl: Thank you for saving me Rayden

Rayden: No worries, but I guess you’ve lot to explain, let’s start with who are you?

Aeria: My name is Aeria, just Aeria and as I said before I’m an Avian, I was born in this village!



Rayden: Ok and it’s rare to see an avian with metallic wing, so what happened?

Aeria: well it’s also rare too see Avian with golden wing Rayden, well two years ago I join the army and we attack the Feather Hill. On that battle I…

Rayden: Wait, you’re part of the army that depart two years ago? So you are part of the army that dissatisfied with our current Warchief, Caesar

Aeria: YES, we are part of the group that dissatisfied with Caesar coward neutral policy and DO NOT interrupt me ever again while I’m narrating Rayden.

Rayden: O-Okay, I’m sorry please continue

Aeria: Right, as I said we attack Feather Hill and on that battle I lost my wing and I was wounded, I thought I’m going to die as I lose consciousness, but when I wake up I was saved by a kind Android--

Rayden: WHAT?! AN ANDROID SAVES YOU!!

Aeria: YES, and What I said about interrupting Rayden?? (Proceed to hit Rayden in comical way)

Rayden: Owwww, I’m sorry Aeria, please continue

Aeria: Ok no more interrupting, so the android, or rather Mr. Vista Eleven take care of me this past two years, and he gives me a new metallic wing, and cybernetic limbs for my lost hand and leg, and turn out not all android are evil, there are many who are dissatisfied with the Android Empire Conquest Policy

Aeria: However, my presence was found out by the Android authority, Mr Eleven manage to brought me outside Feather Hill but in the process, he was captured, so I flee here with all of my might, but guess what? I even not welcomed here

Rayden: Ok, that’s an interesting story there, question: what happened to the rest of the armies? I didn’t recall any survivors of that battle returning to the village.

Aeria: Well most of them was either killed or become a slaves in Feather Hill

Rayden: ….Ok, so you’ve been to Feather Hill right? I would like to…..

*Knock knock knock*

Elder: Rayden I know you’re in there, let me in

Rayden: Quick hide Aeria, or should I say, escape Aeria from the back door, meet me at the cemetery

Aeria: What, Why Cemetery?

Rayden: Just go there, beside I still have a question for you

          Aeria start to escape from the backdoor, while Rayden go to front door and not only the Elder greets him but also Warchief Caesar

Caesar: Well well well Rayden, congratulation for your high grade in the dojo, Caerius must be proud of you

Rayden: Thank you Uncle Caesar, what business do you have coming here?

Elder: Well Rayden we know this morning there’s an Avian wearing eyepatch coming to the village, and when the villager wants to capture her there’s a huge breeze of wind and she vanishes, I know the culprit is you because who else could fly that fast? So where is she Rayden?

Rayden: First the villager is trying to kill her not capture, second what you want to do with her?

Caesar: We’re going to capture and interrogate her, she could be a spy from Andro….

Rayden: Enough!, you should have chosen your words wisely Warchief, Aeria isn’t a spy, she is a good person, albeit temperamental, but nonetheless you’re not going to capture her

Caesar: What, Rayden you don’t know how scary the androids are, they could be plotting our demise with this spy and I don’t need your permission, GUARDS!! Seize this house

Elder: Wait Caesar that’s too harsh..

Rayden: So be it, see ya Warchief

          The guards enter the house and Rayden start to prepare himself, suddenly Rayden start to dash so fast that Caesar, Elder, and all the guards are stunned. Rayden escapes while the all the guards start chasing him.

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Afternoon in the cemetery

Aeria: What took Rayden so long, did he get captured??, wait is that Rayden

Rayden manage to escape but turns out it takes time

Rayden: Sorry Aeria, I need to confuse the guard about my destination before escaping here

Aeria: Well no worries, I thought you’re being captured, so what you want to do here?

Rayden: Just follow me

Rayden and Aeria soon stood in front of Saya’s tombstone

Rayden: *praying* Ma, I manage to finish my training, and I manage to be the best, I’m gonna go to Feather Hill to avenge you, you’ll be lonely while I go but I promise I will come back, Mama please watch me!!

RaydenAeria, my question earlier is.. does my father Caerius the previous warchief is alive? You said that most of the armies are turn into slaves, Is there a chance that my father is alive?

Aeria: Now I begin to see why you’re able to fly so fast, so you’re the previous warchief son, and an avian with golden wing, you’re destined with greatness

Rayden: No need that golden wing superstition, just answer the question

Aeria: Honestly I didn’t see your father there, but being a warchief there’s a chance that the Android imprison your father. The android tends to spare special people afterall, he should be alive.

Rayden: Thank you Aeria, Now I’ve decided, I’m going to infiltrate the Feather Hill and free my father, you’re coming with me

Aeria: What, why should I?

Rayden: First the Avians wants to capture and interrogate you, I don’t think you’re save here, second reason: you’ve been to Feather Hill, you know the android, and don’t you want to rescue Mr Eleven?

Aeria: Well you have a point..

Rayden: Two points..

Aeria: Yeah that’s what I mean!! Ok I’m coming with you, but shouldn’t we prepare something for the journey?

Rayden: Right, I’m going to take some provision and my weapon from the dojo, we are going to sneak out of the village this night

Aeria: Affirmative, and beside there’s something that I need to do in my house, see you later Rayden.

Rayden: Ok meet me near the village border on the east.

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At Night near the village border

Rayden: So Aeria are you prepared?

Aeria: Well I’ve said my goodbye, I’m ready

Rayden: Ok this area has the less guard, and once we’re in the Wind Meadow, no one can capture us

          While Rayden and Aeria sneaking, suddenly they are ambushed by lot of guards, there’s the Elder and Caesar too

Caesar: Well well well, we find out your home is empty, and I know you’re going to escape to Wind Meadow that’s why I sprung an ambush here, but why escape Rayden?

Rayden: I’m going to Feather Hill with Aeria uncle, I’m going to free my father

Caesar: What?! Going to Feather Hill by yourself? Don’t you know what awaits you there? Only Horror!! Surrender Rayden, and gives the girl peacefully, I don’t want to hurt My best friend son.

Rayden: Uncle Caesar, you may be my father best friend, you may be the warchief, but your fear of the android consumes you too much, see? Aeria is one of us? She’s an Avian!!

Caesar: SILENCE, Android took many of our brethren life, Guards, seize them

Aeria: Guess we need to fight, Rayden can you throw me to the front? I’m going to make an opening

Rayden: As you wish




          Rayden prepare his volley service pose while Aeria start doing back flip to land on Rayden volley service pose. Rayden launch Aeria as strong as he can. While being launched in the air, Aeria immediately doing a roll and kick the guard with her metal leg (Cannon Ball Kick). The forces to strong that the guards are scattered. Rayden Immediately follow

Caesar: Follow them

Caesar, Elder, and the Guards begin to follow them, while some guards manage to follow Rayden and Aeria, their combined effort proves too much for the guards, soon they manage to reach Wind Meadow

Rayden: Hold My hand, we are going to follow the wind

Aeria grab Rayden hand and soon they begin escaping the meadow, while the guards have difficulty traversing. The Elder only stood, smile and ..

Elder: I guess we can’t stop him *Inhale* RAYDEN CAERIUS GOODLUCK ON YOUR QUEST

Hearing those words, Rayden smile and together with Aeria they escape the Wind Meadow. Their adventure start now!





To be continued……





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Art & Story Concept: Admin Trainer-K
Story Narrative: Admin ST-Rex

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